New York Times
29 February 2008
This article talks about how Congress and The White House are beginning a national campaign to fight AIDS. This includes fighting AIDS around the world and preventing it in the US. 50 million dollars will be used in campaigning for the next five years against AIDS, malaria, and tuberculosis. This program started five years ago with a smaller budget when AIDS was spreading out of control. Some of the money will be used to train health care workers to care for people with H.I.V and in turn easing the health care shortage. The program also is spreading an abstinence until marriage and fidelity after marriage message.
This article was very informative, covering any questions I may have had about the program. It had a good flow and was easy to follow. The author seems very credible making various references. It is good this issue is being addressed before AIDS gets out of hand as it may affect all of us in some way.
Friday, February 29, 2008
Thursday, February 28, 2008
The Wrong Target
The Advocate, pg. A27
February 19, 2008
Bob Herbert
This article examines prostitution, but it looks at it from a different view. The author, Bob Herbert, does not think we should go out looking for the prostitutes and lock them up for life. Bob Herbert explains the story of a New York City police detective and his girlfriend that were accused of kidnapping and forcing a 13-year-old girl into prostitution. The detective and his girlfriend purchased the young girl for $500. Herbert said that the big story in New York City was that a police detective did this NOT that a girl was forced to prostitute. Herbert wants everyone to realize that our views are twisted. It is common for under-age girls to be arrested for prostitution, but isn't it statutory rape for an adult to have sex with a minor? Herbert has a good point. He said, "If no money is involved, the youngster is considered a victim. But if the man pays for the sex- even if the money is going to the pimp, which is so often the case- the child is considered a prostitute and thus subject in many venues to arrest and incarceration." He goes on to criticize the officials in New York for not imposing the Safe Harbor Act which would not allow underage children to be criminalized for prostitution. They would have had to offer the children counseling, medical care and shelter, if necessary. Instead, the officials use the threat of jail to make them rat out their pimps.
I really liked this article. The author got me interested, and made me sympathize with the young children. I don't think he could have done anything different to make this article better. Stories like this one make me sick. It is so sad to think that children are forced into prostitution then are put into jail. I think people need to rethink many laws in our country.
February 19, 2008
Bob Herbert
This article examines prostitution, but it looks at it from a different view. The author, Bob Herbert, does not think we should go out looking for the prostitutes and lock them up for life. Bob Herbert explains the story of a New York City police detective and his girlfriend that were accused of kidnapping and forcing a 13-year-old girl into prostitution. The detective and his girlfriend purchased the young girl for $500. Herbert said that the big story in New York City was that a police detective did this NOT that a girl was forced to prostitute. Herbert wants everyone to realize that our views are twisted. It is common for under-age girls to be arrested for prostitution, but isn't it statutory rape for an adult to have sex with a minor? Herbert has a good point. He said, "If no money is involved, the youngster is considered a victim. But if the man pays for the sex- even if the money is going to the pimp, which is so often the case- the child is considered a prostitute and thus subject in many venues to arrest and incarceration." He goes on to criticize the officials in New York for not imposing the Safe Harbor Act which would not allow underage children to be criminalized for prostitution. They would have had to offer the children counseling, medical care and shelter, if necessary. Instead, the officials use the threat of jail to make them rat out their pimps.
I really liked this article. The author got me interested, and made me sympathize with the young children. I don't think he could have done anything different to make this article better. Stories like this one make me sick. It is so sad to think that children are forced into prostitution then are put into jail. I think people need to rethink many laws in our country.
The Long Haul in Afghanistan
New York Times
2-28-2008
By ROGER COHEN
This article is about how European troops could be in Afghanistan. In the article the author presents some very interesting facts, the author is also a pretty descriptive writer. He describes the settings so well that you can get a great mental image of what he is talking about. He provides great facts and seems to have done some research and even a few interviews. He quotes people talking about the issue. He mentions that it might take up to four or five more years for them to be pulled from this location. I thought this was a very well written article that brought some good and new interesting facts to me.
2-28-2008
By ROGER COHEN
This article is about how European troops could be in Afghanistan. In the article the author presents some very interesting facts, the author is also a pretty descriptive writer. He describes the settings so well that you can get a great mental image of what he is talking about. He provides great facts and seems to have done some research and even a few interviews. He quotes people talking about the issue. He mentions that it might take up to four or five more years for them to be pulled from this location. I thought this was a very well written article that brought some good and new interesting facts to me.
Wednesday, February 27, 2008
Hit-Run fatality story angers reader
The Advocate
2/27/2008 Page 6B
Lisa Comeaux
In this article the author had some angry comments to say about a recent article in the Feb. 23 Metro. He was upset to see that in the previous article about a fatal hit and run the collumnist never once apologized or sent his sympathy out to the family of the victum. He sayed that the article ended with the victums past criminal history which was totally irrelevant to the story. I think theis article was not written to well due to bad language and inept factual information; however, i completely agree with the message he was trying to tell us. I completely agree that when a paper is covering a death they should always end the article with acts of sympathy to show their support for the family and freinds of the victum. I think it was really careless and unprofessional for the author of the initial article toleave out something so important.
2/27/2008 Page 6B
Lisa Comeaux
In this article the author had some angry comments to say about a recent article in the Feb. 23 Metro. He was upset to see that in the previous article about a fatal hit and run the collumnist never once apologized or sent his sympathy out to the family of the victum. He sayed that the article ended with the victums past criminal history which was totally irrelevant to the story. I think theis article was not written to well due to bad language and inept factual information; however, i completely agree with the message he was trying to tell us. I completely agree that when a paper is covering a death they should always end the article with acts of sympathy to show their support for the family and freinds of the victum. I think it was really careless and unprofessional for the author of the initial article toleave out something so important.
Boycott Olympics until China respects more Human Rights
USA Today
2/27/2008 Page 10a
By: William Rowan
This article is written with such a bias, negative attitude that it is hard to even understand what
the author wants from the Chinese government. The author tries to inform the readers that there are way too many problems going on in China for them to worry about hosting the Olympics. He tells us about a specific case where China uses inhumane acts to punish its convicted citizens. I think this article was not at all written. I do not think that he made his point convincingly and there was not nearly enough information. The article was also hard to read because the author was so negative and bias.
2/27/2008 Page 10a
By: William Rowan
This article is written with such a bias, negative attitude that it is hard to even understand what
the author wants from the Chinese government. The author tries to inform the readers that there are way too many problems going on in China for them to worry about hosting the Olympics. He tells us about a specific case where China uses inhumane acts to punish its convicted citizens. I think this article was not at all written. I do not think that he made his point convincingly and there was not nearly enough information. The article was also hard to read because the author was so negative and bias.
Sunday, February 24, 2008
The Biggest Beef Recall Ever
New York Times
21 February 2008
This article talks about the biggest meat recall in history of more than 143 million pounds of beef, some of which that went to school programs. Even though meat from sick cows is banned, meat from most of them was sold and caught on video. On video, the workers were abusing animals in order to get them to the slaughterhouse. The author points out that the Congress needs to reconstruct the food inspection program and give more power to the Food and Drug Administration. Also pointed out is the Bush administration’s cutbacks on budgets.
This article was very informative. It makes me more aware of what we are eating and how even though it might have FDA approved sticker on it, it still comes from bad meat. The author seemed very passionate about this issue but used good sources to seem credible.
21 February 2008
This article talks about the biggest meat recall in history of more than 143 million pounds of beef, some of which that went to school programs. Even though meat from sick cows is banned, meat from most of them was sold and caught on video. On video, the workers were abusing animals in order to get them to the slaughterhouse. The author points out that the Congress needs to reconstruct the food inspection program and give more power to the Food and Drug Administration. Also pointed out is the Bush administration’s cutbacks on budgets.
This article was very informative. It makes me more aware of what we are eating and how even though it might have FDA approved sticker on it, it still comes from bad meat. The author seemed very passionate about this issue but used good sources to seem credible.
Ethanol by the Numbers
Ethanol could be the answer to ending the country’s dependence on foreign oil, but many are having concerns. While it could reduce the harmful gasoline emissions, it could possibly increase dangerous greenhouse gasses if not properly produced. For ethanol to replace the gasoline we now use, it must reach at least 20 percent reductions of greenhouse gasses. Science magazine said that the Environmental Protection Agency, who is in charge of calculating all emissions, has ignored the emissions from the plants and land that it’s coming from. This could lead to a major discrepancy and greater problems down the road.
This was a very informative argument. The author had a good knowledge of what he was talking about and I can see he did his research. I had no idea the United States was thinking about replacing our gasoline with ethanol, but if it helps the environment, I’m all for it!
This was a very informative argument. The author had a good knowledge of what he was talking about and I can see he did his research. I had no idea the United States was thinking about replacing our gasoline with ethanol, but if it helps the environment, I’m all for it!
Saturday, February 23, 2008
"Like a Fish Needs a Donut."
New York Times
Author: Judith Warner
February 7, 2008
Well, this article is about as revelant as Britney Spears' stay in a mental institution. While I am aware of the struggles that women have gone through since the dawn of time, I found this article somewhat of a mockery. Ms. Warner was having breakfast with two of her male friends when she asked what kind of woman they would date if they could have anyone. They answered with with with an unsuprising, "a babe." She was deeply offended that they would want that instead of a mature older woman with experience. I do not see why she was suprised of the answer; it seems a bit of common sense. She goes on to list examples of how older men would choose a young attractive woman rather than someone in their own age group. In my opinion, this piece was suited more to a conversation with girlfriends. I feel that she should have touched more meaningful topics such as the real struggles of women in Africa.
Author: Judith Warner
February 7, 2008
Well, this article is about as revelant as Britney Spears' stay in a mental institution. While I am aware of the struggles that women have gone through since the dawn of time, I found this article somewhat of a mockery. Ms. Warner was having breakfast with two of her male friends when she asked what kind of woman they would date if they could have anyone. They answered with with with an unsuprising, "a babe." She was deeply offended that they would want that instead of a mature older woman with experience. I do not see why she was suprised of the answer; it seems a bit of common sense. She goes on to list examples of how older men would choose a young attractive woman rather than someone in their own age group. In my opinion, this piece was suited more to a conversation with girlfriends. I feel that she should have touched more meaningful topics such as the real struggles of women in Africa.
Friday, February 22, 2008
Ink Before you Vote
This article talks starts off with the author talking about the wearing of his tattoos over time. He had one tattoo that said “Carpe Diem”, and after 20 years of having it, it wasn’t looking the way it used to. He went to see if a man named Doodle could fix it for him, and as he was getting his tattoo, Doodle was telling him about what he thought about the presidential election. He said had never voted before, but he planed to vote for Obama for the 2008 election. He also said that even though he thinks Obama is the best choice, if he gets voted into office, he thinks Obama will be assassinated by an angry racist. Doodle said “racism is still an ugly thing in this country” and he thinks it’s really sad. The author finished up his tattoo appointment and went home to his wife. He told her what he talked about with the tattoo artist and she said one of the students in her class was saying that as well. That made the author think about how much courage Obama has and how he is taking a chance for his country.
I agree that racism is still alive and present in the United States, and it’s a shame. There are so many great people with different cultures and ethnic backgrounds that you would never get the chance to know if you we’re to busy hating them for no reason. I also don’t think that being black has anything to do with a person’s ability to do a job. Obama could be a really great leader, but he won’t get a fair chance if he’s shunned because of racism. The author brings up a really good point that I’m passionate about. He did it in an interesting way by tying the tattoo words to the moral of his story. Even though it wasn’t an aggressive argument, the article still got the issue out there and I really enjoyed reading it.
I agree that racism is still alive and present in the United States, and it’s a shame. There are so many great people with different cultures and ethnic backgrounds that you would never get the chance to know if you we’re to busy hating them for no reason. I also don’t think that being black has anything to do with a person’s ability to do a job. Obama could be a really great leader, but he won’t get a fair chance if he’s shunned because of racism. The author brings up a really good point that I’m passionate about. He did it in an interesting way by tying the tattoo words to the moral of his story. Even though it wasn’t an aggressive argument, the article still got the issue out there and I really enjoyed reading it.
Tobacco tax: Time to clear smoke and pass it
The Clarion-Ledger
February 22, 2008
This article discusses a bill in Mississippi that has just been passed by the House of Representatives. This article was well researched and compared the actions of Mississippi to other state's that have already enacted high tobacco taxes. Right now Mississippi's tobacco tax is 18 cents, the new bill proposes to raise this tax to $1.18. Although this is a large increase, the author points out that Mississippi's tax on tobacco is the third lowest in the nation. This article was calling its readers to take action on this matter and to contact their local Senate members to urge them to vote on this bill. The extra revenue from this tax would go to help fund Mississippi's Medicaid program. This article employed mainly logical and emotional appeals. This was a very good article and made a very good appeal for you to go contact your local Senate members.
February 22, 2008
This article discusses a bill in Mississippi that has just been passed by the House of Representatives. This article was well researched and compared the actions of Mississippi to other state's that have already enacted high tobacco taxes. Right now Mississippi's tobacco tax is 18 cents, the new bill proposes to raise this tax to $1.18. Although this is a large increase, the author points out that Mississippi's tax on tobacco is the third lowest in the nation. This article was calling its readers to take action on this matter and to contact their local Senate members to urge them to vote on this bill. The extra revenue from this tax would go to help fund Mississippi's Medicaid program. This article employed mainly logical and emotional appeals. This was a very good article and made a very good appeal for you to go contact your local Senate members.
Thursday, February 21, 2008
The Global Tobacco Threat
The Global Tobacco Threat
The New York Times, pg A26
February 19, 2008
This article begins with the fact; "Three years ago, an international treaty took effect that was designed to help developing countries resist aggressive marketing by big tobacco companies." The countries that signed this treaty were not supposed to allow advertising, marketing or sponsorship of tobacco. The theory behind this was that if there was less advertising of tobacco, then there would be less people that use tobacco. This theory proved true in the wealthier countries that followed through with this treaty. The tobacco use indeed declined in wealthier countries. However, governments of low- and middle-income countries have not followed through because they have become addicted to the money from the tobacco taxes. The lower-income countries do not realize that if they do not lower the use of tobacco in their countries, then there will be huge health and economic damage in the future. A report from the World Health Organization (W.H.O.) states that tobacco will kill more people this year than tuberculosis, AIDS and malaria combined. The W.H.O. recommended strategies to lower tobacco use in countries: very high taxes on tobacco products; a total ban on all advertising and promotion; a ban on smoking in all public spaces and workplaces; large, scary warning pictures on packs; and strong programs to help people quit. The author writes that not a single country fully implements all of the measures. The Bush administration, reluctantly signed the international treaty, has not submitted it to the senate for ratification. The author wants people to follow the treaty and use the stratigies suggested by the W.H.O..
I liked this article. The author showed that there was indeed a problem, but none of the countries wanted to fix the problem. There is a solution to this problem, but the countries have different priorities.
The New York Times, pg A26
February 19, 2008
This article begins with the fact; "Three years ago, an international treaty took effect that was designed to help developing countries resist aggressive marketing by big tobacco companies." The countries that signed this treaty were not supposed to allow advertising, marketing or sponsorship of tobacco. The theory behind this was that if there was less advertising of tobacco, then there would be less people that use tobacco. This theory proved true in the wealthier countries that followed through with this treaty. The tobacco use indeed declined in wealthier countries. However, governments of low- and middle-income countries have not followed through because they have become addicted to the money from the tobacco taxes. The lower-income countries do not realize that if they do not lower the use of tobacco in their countries, then there will be huge health and economic damage in the future. A report from the World Health Organization (W.H.O.) states that tobacco will kill more people this year than tuberculosis, AIDS and malaria combined. The W.H.O. recommended strategies to lower tobacco use in countries: very high taxes on tobacco products; a total ban on all advertising and promotion; a ban on smoking in all public spaces and workplaces; large, scary warning pictures on packs; and strong programs to help people quit. The author writes that not a single country fully implements all of the measures. The Bush administration, reluctantly signed the international treaty, has not submitted it to the senate for ratification. The author wants people to follow the treaty and use the stratigies suggested by the W.H.O..
I liked this article. The author showed that there was indeed a problem, but none of the countries wanted to fix the problem. There is a solution to this problem, but the countries have different priorities.
Bush In Africa
New York Times
February 21, 2008
Finally I feel like someone has actually gone against the grain here and complimented President Bush. This article talks about Bush's foreign policy and the programs he has established in Africa to help with AIDS awareness and other things. He states that many mother and children have been saved from the spread of AIDS and malaria. The writer also talks about how the program will probably not be renewed. Bush wants to expand the program from 18 billion to 30 billion. He wishes to implement programs that encourage abstinance beofre marriage and the use of condoms. Many people threw a fit about this, however, because it disagrees with their "personal beliefs" . What it comes down to is that the program will probably not be renewed and all of that work will be undone. I liked the article because it was different. I don't remember hearing about Bush's trip to Africa and people lining the streets to greet him in the media. I guess its too much to expect the media to cover relevant topics. I felt like the writer was honest, but it was obvious he was trying to bring this situation to light and get this bill renewed.
February 21, 2008
Finally I feel like someone has actually gone against the grain here and complimented President Bush. This article talks about Bush's foreign policy and the programs he has established in Africa to help with AIDS awareness and other things. He states that many mother and children have been saved from the spread of AIDS and malaria. The writer also talks about how the program will probably not be renewed. Bush wants to expand the program from 18 billion to 30 billion. He wishes to implement programs that encourage abstinance beofre marriage and the use of condoms. Many people threw a fit about this, however, because it disagrees with their "personal beliefs" . What it comes down to is that the program will probably not be renewed and all of that work will be undone. I liked the article because it was different. I don't remember hearing about Bush's trip to Africa and people lining the streets to greet him in the media. I guess its too much to expect the media to cover relevant topics. I felt like the writer was honest, but it was obvious he was trying to bring this situation to light and get this bill renewed.
Ending a Racial Outrage
New York Times
February 21, 2008
On February 19 of this year a very self rightous Joel Klien strolled into court demanding a law be lifted that demanded his school have a certain amount of non-white students. The school, Coney Island's Mark Twain School , is a magnet school and had the law put in place in 1974. He argued that thte law was no longer needed and that since the law had been lifted in other places it should be lifted here. What Joel failed to mention was that recently he had participated in a gourgeous act of discrimination. A young Indian girl by the name of Nikkiti Rau is the daughter of Indian immigrants and unfortuantely applied after the school had filled its "quota" of non-white students. What's even more funny is that she scored much higher than the white students enrolled. I think that this is digusting. Fortunately, They are now being sued by Nikkiti's parents. I really liked this article. I think it is great when we bring to attention that there is still discrimination. I didn't feel like he tried to use any kind of emotional appeal on me and that he just gave me the facts.
February 21, 2008
On February 19 of this year a very self rightous Joel Klien strolled into court demanding a law be lifted that demanded his school have a certain amount of non-white students. The school, Coney Island's Mark Twain School , is a magnet school and had the law put in place in 1974. He argued that thte law was no longer needed and that since the law had been lifted in other places it should be lifted here. What Joel failed to mention was that recently he had participated in a gourgeous act of discrimination. A young Indian girl by the name of Nikkiti Rau is the daughter of Indian immigrants and unfortuantely applied after the school had filled its "quota" of non-white students. What's even more funny is that she scored much higher than the white students enrolled. I think that this is digusting. Fortunately, They are now being sued by Nikkiti's parents. I really liked this article. I think it is great when we bring to attention that there is still discrimination. I didn't feel like he tried to use any kind of emotional appeal on me and that he just gave me the facts.
Cuba Libre.....Someday
New York Times
February 21, 2008
"And that Cuba's long nightmare of tyranny finally will come to an end." This quote ends the long article about the recent resignation of Fidel Castro. As we know Fidel's brother Raul has taken over. What the writer is really concerned about however is whther or not the embargo on Cuba will be lifted. To him things look dim. Raul has as he says always been Fidel's "enforcer". THe writer worries that nothing will change for the economy wrecked island and that they will remain the way they have been for many decades. There is a small flicker of light at the end of the tunnel however. He states that there have been a few restrictions lifted in Cuba and that Raul may even widen economic freedom for Cubans. All we can really do is sit and wait I guess. I thought the argument was well written. He gave a lot of useful information and spoke to me like I was on his level. I also didn't feel like he was pushing any certain opinion on me.
February 21, 2008
"And that Cuba's long nightmare of tyranny finally will come to an end." This quote ends the long article about the recent resignation of Fidel Castro. As we know Fidel's brother Raul has taken over. What the writer is really concerned about however is whther or not the embargo on Cuba will be lifted. To him things look dim. Raul has as he says always been Fidel's "enforcer". THe writer worries that nothing will change for the economy wrecked island and that they will remain the way they have been for many decades. There is a small flicker of light at the end of the tunnel however. He states that there have been a few restrictions lifted in Cuba and that Raul may even widen economic freedom for Cubans. All we can really do is sit and wait I guess. I thought the argument was well written. He gave a lot of useful information and spoke to me like I was on his level. I also didn't feel like he was pushing any certain opinion on me.
Wednesday, February 20, 2008
"The End of Literacy? Don't Stop Reading."
Washington Post
February 17, 2008
Author:Howard Gardner
While this article presented a clear argument, it showed both sides of the situation, which I appreciated. It stated that one section of the population believes that literacy is going down the drain because of the decreased leisure reading,and student's declining scores on standardized tests. He then goes on to state that while this may be true, the Internet has opened a whole new area of possiblilities for literacy. He felt that literature has evolved over thousands of years, from cave paintings to scrolls and finally to the printing press. The Internet to him is just another form of literature, with a much broader scope and capable of reaching a larger number of people. While I found his view interesting and he made many valid points, I still think that exposing people to literature to the past is very important in education whether it be via the Internet or in a book.
February 17, 2008
Author:Howard Gardner
While this article presented a clear argument, it showed both sides of the situation, which I appreciated. It stated that one section of the population believes that literacy is going down the drain because of the decreased leisure reading,and student's declining scores on standardized tests. He then goes on to state that while this may be true, the Internet has opened a whole new area of possiblilities for literacy. He felt that literature has evolved over thousands of years, from cave paintings to scrolls and finally to the printing press. The Internet to him is just another form of literature, with a much broader scope and capable of reaching a larger number of people. While I found his view interesting and he made many valid points, I still think that exposing people to literature to the past is very important in education whether it be via the Internet or in a book.
When Things Go Wrong
When Things Go Wrong
The New York Times by Verlyn Kilnkenborg
Febuary 19, 2008
http://www.nytimes.com/2008/02/19/opinion/19tue3.html
This is probably one of the worst articles I have ever read. A lady goes on for five paragraphs talking about how her horse got a cut and now is ok. The author is the owner of the horse and has an obvious obsession with it. She talks about how one day the horse came to the stall with a cut and they brought it to the vet. The vet gave it stitches and today the horse is fine. I’m glad that this ladies horse was ok, but I don’t think this is something appropriate to be published in the New York Times. The author had obviously not done much writing before this article.
The New York Times by Verlyn Kilnkenborg
Febuary 19, 2008
http://www.nytimes.com/2008/02/19/opinion/19tue3.html
This is probably one of the worst articles I have ever read. A lady goes on for five paragraphs talking about how her horse got a cut and now is ok. The author is the owner of the horse and has an obvious obsession with it. She talks about how one day the horse came to the stall with a cut and they brought it to the vet. The vet gave it stitches and today the horse is fine. I’m glad that this ladies horse was ok, but I don’t think this is something appropriate to be published in the New York Times. The author had obviously not done much writing before this article.
Packing Heat in the Parks
Packing Heat in the Parks
The New York Times
Febuary 20, 2008
http://www.nytimes.com/2008/02/20/opinion/20wed3.html?_r=1&ref=opinion&oref=slogin
This article is about a bill that is currently in the senate to allow people to bring fire arms into national parks. The reasoning behind the bill is that people need to be able to bring the guns in the parks for protection. The author does a good job of explaining why it is not a good idea to pass the bill. He references park rangers when he says that if guns are allowed to be brought into parks it will only decrease the public’s safety and the safety of the wildlife living there. Right now there are 47 senators who are willing to pass this bill. I think it is ridiculous for people to feel the need to bring a gun into national parks. I think it is sad that the world has come to a point where some people feel they must bring a gun with them wherever they go. I think it would have been really affective for the author to include facts about how many people are actually attacked and raped in national parks. If the numbers show that it is a major problem something should be done.
The New York Times
Febuary 20, 2008
http://www.nytimes.com/2008/02/20/opinion/20wed3.html?_r=1&ref=opinion&oref=slogin
This article is about a bill that is currently in the senate to allow people to bring fire arms into national parks. The reasoning behind the bill is that people need to be able to bring the guns in the parks for protection. The author does a good job of explaining why it is not a good idea to pass the bill. He references park rangers when he says that if guns are allowed to be brought into parks it will only decrease the public’s safety and the safety of the wildlife living there. Right now there are 47 senators who are willing to pass this bill. I think it is ridiculous for people to feel the need to bring a gun into national parks. I think it is sad that the world has come to a point where some people feel they must bring a gun with them wherever they go. I think it would have been really affective for the author to include facts about how many people are actually attacked and raped in national parks. If the numbers show that it is a major problem something should be done.
An "A" should be an "A", kids should be kids, and schools need to stay schools.
So is that like an A?
New York Times
2/20/08
In the Hartford, CT school district, there is a new type of report card. This new type of report card is more like a periodic psycological evaluation report than a report card with simple grades. The report card the school district has adopted gives parents of children as early as pre-kindergarten a evaluation on 58 academic, social, and behavior sills that can end up being seven pages in legnth. To me, this is more like a teachers opinion judging the quality of the child, not his class or learning performance on the material presented. As far as anyone can remember, and based on my own experience, children attend school to learn, not to be raised. Whatever happened to parents spending time and talking with their kids to determine their progress of maturing into intelligent, moral, and social adults? It's rediculous that schools have any support for this new report card. I would feel as if the school thought they could do a better job at parenting than me. Why would any parents let an over-rated second grade school teacher evaluate their children in these kinds of aspects? If the child, acting like the CHILD he/she is, gets under a particular teachers skin by cutting up a little bit in class, the teacher might conclude and report that the child isn't progressing "normally", because she doesn't have the patience required for the job she signed up for. This is an extremely inaccurate way to grade children, and could have unforseen effects on his real progression into an adult. I think this will cause alot more children to get in trouble at home with their parents for just being a kid and acting and doing things kids normally do, because they don't know any better. this is an extremely biased system of grading, as opposed to everyone elses unbiased grading system of letter grades. This is set up for doing our children more harm than good. Who do teachers think they are, now thinking they can grade children on aspects of their character and personality. If parents feel the need for this kind of report, take your child, on your own money and time, and see a psycologist for a real evaluation. If teachers can report on all this stuff and write this all-encompassing evaluation and report card, what next? Will teachers beable to start writing presciptions for the ADD kids? Are they all going to get a Dr. title slapped to the front of their name? This author was great and i'm glad i found this article. i completely agree with this author and recommed reading it (it's short) if feel like it. Lastly, Schools are for teaching, and parents are for raising their own children. lets try to keep it that way.
New York Times
2/20/08
In the Hartford, CT school district, there is a new type of report card. This new type of report card is more like a periodic psycological evaluation report than a report card with simple grades. The report card the school district has adopted gives parents of children as early as pre-kindergarten a evaluation on 58 academic, social, and behavior sills that can end up being seven pages in legnth. To me, this is more like a teachers opinion judging the quality of the child, not his class or learning performance on the material presented. As far as anyone can remember, and based on my own experience, children attend school to learn, not to be raised. Whatever happened to parents spending time and talking with their kids to determine their progress of maturing into intelligent, moral, and social adults? It's rediculous that schools have any support for this new report card. I would feel as if the school thought they could do a better job at parenting than me. Why would any parents let an over-rated second grade school teacher evaluate their children in these kinds of aspects? If the child, acting like the CHILD he/she is, gets under a particular teachers skin by cutting up a little bit in class, the teacher might conclude and report that the child isn't progressing "normally", because she doesn't have the patience required for the job she signed up for. This is an extremely inaccurate way to grade children, and could have unforseen effects on his real progression into an adult. I think this will cause alot more children to get in trouble at home with their parents for just being a kid and acting and doing things kids normally do, because they don't know any better. this is an extremely biased system of grading, as opposed to everyone elses unbiased grading system of letter grades. This is set up for doing our children more harm than good. Who do teachers think they are, now thinking they can grade children on aspects of their character and personality. If parents feel the need for this kind of report, take your child, on your own money and time, and see a psycologist for a real evaluation. If teachers can report on all this stuff and write this all-encompassing evaluation and report card, what next? Will teachers beable to start writing presciptions for the ADD kids? Are they all going to get a Dr. title slapped to the front of their name? This author was great and i'm glad i found this article. i completely agree with this author and recommed reading it (it's short) if feel like it. Lastly, Schools are for teaching, and parents are for raising their own children. lets try to keep it that way.
America on drugs
Overselling Overmedication
New York Times
2/20/08
This article was written in the New York times about how America really doesn't have the drug problem everyone thinks it has. I'm not talking about illegal drugs, i'm talking about prescription medications. The article is called Overselling Overmedication by Judith Warner, and argues that it only APPERAS that america has been inaccurately and overprescribed prescription medication drugs.The article was very well written in my opinion and brought some interesting facts, statistics and ideas to light.
The article argues that the only reason "Big Pharma"(large pharmaceutical companies) are made to look so evil today is that because they are some of the biggest corporations in the world, their ad's are everywhere, and their products(medications) can be related to everyone, because so many people rely on their medicine to be a normal functioning member of society. I would have to agree for the most part with this author. I worked in a pharmacy for 3 years and both my parents are pharmacist, and most people honestly rely on their medicine to even be alive. The life expectancy of my generation is 120 years! I can reasonably estimate the reason for this unheard of age, as an average age i will be alive, is because current prescription drugs are good now, just imagine how good they will be when i'm old and need to take them so something crazy doesn't happen like my heart exploding during romantic times with the old lady. Humans will continue to need medications to fix ourselves because we destroy our bodies everyday with cigarettes, liquor, fast food, harmful drugs, unsafe sex, and walking miles and miles from your car to your class because LSU decides to rennovate every aspect of their campus during my time of benefitting from their educational facilities. Broken things need fixing if they intend to last. We need to be "fixed" when were old, so we can stay old. which makes no sense but you get the point. sorry for that ramble but the point i'm trying to make is that i congradulate this author for looking at this from the not so normal perspective instead of the normal drug company articles about how they are governed by satan, and don't care about their consumers. I'm almost sure that we dont' "alter" our minds anymore than people before modern society, where they probly stayed in an "altered" state of mind because life then really was harsh, violent and real. I guess they probly wanted to escape reality alot more than we do now. Sorry this is long i could write a paper on this. Great article, mostly in agreement, great points were made, i could write alot more but i know your tired of reading this.
New York Times
2/20/08
This article was written in the New York times about how America really doesn't have the drug problem everyone thinks it has. I'm not talking about illegal drugs, i'm talking about prescription medications. The article is called Overselling Overmedication by Judith Warner, and argues that it only APPERAS that america has been inaccurately and overprescribed prescription medication drugs.The article was very well written in my opinion and brought some interesting facts, statistics and ideas to light.
The article argues that the only reason "Big Pharma"(large pharmaceutical companies) are made to look so evil today is that because they are some of the biggest corporations in the world, their ad's are everywhere, and their products(medications) can be related to everyone, because so many people rely on their medicine to be a normal functioning member of society. I would have to agree for the most part with this author. I worked in a pharmacy for 3 years and both my parents are pharmacist, and most people honestly rely on their medicine to even be alive. The life expectancy of my generation is 120 years! I can reasonably estimate the reason for this unheard of age, as an average age i will be alive, is because current prescription drugs are good now, just imagine how good they will be when i'm old and need to take them so something crazy doesn't happen like my heart exploding during romantic times with the old lady. Humans will continue to need medications to fix ourselves because we destroy our bodies everyday with cigarettes, liquor, fast food, harmful drugs, unsafe sex, and walking miles and miles from your car to your class because LSU decides to rennovate every aspect of their campus during my time of benefitting from their educational facilities. Broken things need fixing if they intend to last. We need to be "fixed" when were old, so we can stay old. which makes no sense but you get the point. sorry for that ramble but the point i'm trying to make is that i congradulate this author for looking at this from the not so normal perspective instead of the normal drug company articles about how they are governed by satan, and don't care about their consumers. I'm almost sure that we dont' "alter" our minds anymore than people before modern society, where they probly stayed in an "altered" state of mind because life then really was harsh, violent and real. I guess they probly wanted to escape reality alot more than we do now. Sorry this is long i could write a paper on this. Great article, mostly in agreement, great points were made, i could write alot more but i know your tired of reading this.
Tuesday, February 19, 2008
CNN: Lindsay Lohan Poses Nude as Marilyn Monroe
This is mainly a gripe about CNN's wonderful news reporting. Masquerading as a serious news station, CNN disappoints by reporting on television several times today as well as printing articles on Lindsay Lohan's latest and greatest activities. The article on their website critiques her motives and complains about her bad career choice as well as what a bad person she is. In my opinion this is an example of a very poor article for a real news business. Perhaps if they had reported this as a bad influence on the youth of american girls or perhaps glorified it as a classy tribute to the liberal arts, then agree or not on their points, it would have been a genuine editorial. Instead, their complete lack of making any sort of point besides a blog style complaint about how CNN doesn't like her is simply nothing short of shocking. To be fair, CNN is not alone in this entertainment style "news", unfortunately FOX and CSNBC shared in very similar stories.
Monday, February 18, 2008
Clinton Camp Goes After Obama Over General Election Campaign Financing Plans
This fox article is a editorial of an atypical "he said she said" political argument. The Clinton campaign is blasting Obama for "going back on [the] pledge" he made regarding public campaign funding. While the Clinton front's argument is definitely not iron clad, the article does a remarkably good job of being completely unbiased. Instead of interjecting with his own opinions or paraphrasing to the point of partiality, he used well directed quotes making his story short and quite to the point. Also he made a very deliberate emphasis on using equally pointed quotes from both camps, ensuring an unbiased editorial as well as setting an informational scene on which the reader can truly make his or her own well informed decision.
Keep Religious BeliefsSeperate from Governing USA
Keep Religous Beliefs Seperate from Governing USA
USA Today page 3A
2/18/08
This article is again another argument that discusses whether religion should be kept seperate from government. The article begins with a very negative attitude toward religion inside of the government. The author expresses that we need to focus more on important issues that will unite us as a country rather than unimportant topics such as gay marriage, abortion, or in school prayer that can tear us apart. The articles follows up with a differents authors opinion that respects the need for religion, but doesn't think it should be part of the government. He agrees that religion will give our world leaders a system of guidelines and morals that can help only help our president. However those religions that encourages masocism and death could be detrimental to our society.
I think that this article tries not to be bias by adding a difference of opinions, but at the same time does a bad job. I think the author jumps to conclusions about how religous disputes tear our country apart. I think the article is not well written and leaves out tons of important information that can help the reader to form an opinion.
USA Today page 3A
2/18/08
This article is again another argument that discusses whether religion should be kept seperate from government. The article begins with a very negative attitude toward religion inside of the government. The author expresses that we need to focus more on important issues that will unite us as a country rather than unimportant topics such as gay marriage, abortion, or in school prayer that can tear us apart. The articles follows up with a differents authors opinion that respects the need for religion, but doesn't think it should be part of the government. He agrees that religion will give our world leaders a system of guidelines and morals that can help only help our president. However those religions that encourages masocism and death could be detrimental to our society.
I think that this article tries not to be bias by adding a difference of opinions, but at the same time does a bad job. I think the author jumps to conclusions about how religous disputes tear our country apart. I think the article is not well written and leaves out tons of important information that can help the reader to form an opinion.
Some Input on Youth
Some Input on Youth
The Advocate, page 6B
2/18/08
The article I read was written to eplain the recent attempts of Baton Rouge to retain and attract the youth of today. All alround the country towns are trying to make their economy more appealing for those young adults will help to improve todays economy. This article express that the best way to attract the youth is to ask the youth exactly want they want to see. Recently an online survey has been brought up asking young adults about issues facing them in their region and what can be done to fix them. This survey is sponsered by Southern Growth Policies Board, a nonprofit, nonpartisan organization in North Carolina that studies public policies throughout the south. To benefit in this survey you can log on to http:southern.org/surveyintro.shtml.
I liked this article article a lot because it gives the youth a voice in their own future rather than letting the adults of today pathe the way for us. I think thatit was written really well but left out a few details. I was left a little confused about exactly what was on the quizes and how the organization will use the results.
The Advocate, page 6B
2/18/08
The article I read was written to eplain the recent attempts of Baton Rouge to retain and attract the youth of today. All alround the country towns are trying to make their economy more appealing for those young adults will help to improve todays economy. This article express that the best way to attract the youth is to ask the youth exactly want they want to see. Recently an online survey has been brought up asking young adults about issues facing them in their region and what can be done to fix them. This survey is sponsered by Southern Growth Policies Board, a nonprofit, nonpartisan organization in North Carolina that studies public policies throughout the south. To benefit in this survey you can log on to http:southern.org/surveyintro.shtml.
I liked this article article a lot because it gives the youth a voice in their own future rather than letting the adults of today pathe the way for us. I think thatit was written really well but left out a few details. I was left a little confused about exactly what was on the quizes and how the organization will use the results.
Issues Take a Backseat to Baseball
The Advocate
2/18/08
R. Jason Cooper
"I continue to be outraged by both the blatant abuse of power and total neglect of responsibilities demonstrated by some of our Washington politicians who are investigating major league baseball players and their alleged use of steroids and human growth hormone," is the opening line to Coopers letter. He is clearly not happy with Congress' use of time. He then goes onto stating the many things that Washington should cover such as the wars in the Middle East, illegal immigrants, the price of gas, and home foreclosures. He uses very strong language to get his point across and is clearly trying to get everyone on his side. He uses lots of questions of why should we do this instead of that which was a good way to hold the reader's attention.
I thought it was a well written article and took a good approach to get his point across. He told his issue, presented the facts, and used facts of older politicians. After the article I agree with the author that there is too much on this issue and too much on just Roger Clemons. It does need to be taken care of but not by the government. It should be taken care of by Bug Selig and the MLB. There are way too many other issues for Congress to take care of instead of the entertainment business.
2/18/08
R. Jason Cooper
"I continue to be outraged by both the blatant abuse of power and total neglect of responsibilities demonstrated by some of our Washington politicians who are investigating major league baseball players and their alleged use of steroids and human growth hormone," is the opening line to Coopers letter. He is clearly not happy with Congress' use of time. He then goes onto stating the many things that Washington should cover such as the wars in the Middle East, illegal immigrants, the price of gas, and home foreclosures. He uses very strong language to get his point across and is clearly trying to get everyone on his side. He uses lots of questions of why should we do this instead of that which was a good way to hold the reader's attention.
I thought it was a well written article and took a good approach to get his point across. He told his issue, presented the facts, and used facts of older politicians. After the article I agree with the author that there is too much on this issue and too much on just Roger Clemons. It does need to be taken care of but not by the government. It should be taken care of by Bug Selig and the MLB. There are way too many other issues for Congress to take care of instead of the entertainment business.
One Friend Facebook Hasn't Made Yet: Privacy Rights
The New York Times
February 18, 2008
Author: Adam Cohen
In this article, the author, Adam, is informing his readers about the lack of privacy settings on not only Facebook, but other websites, also. He mainly talks about Facebook and Google. Adam starts the article off by showing the readers exactly how much information Facebook allows its user to put out, "A co-worker apologized to me recently for being slow on a task. “It’s probably just your insomnia from last night,” I said. She was confused about how I knew, but I reminded her we were Facebook friends, and that she had posted a “status update” about her sleeplessness." The author complains that the information such as status updates and the ability to show "friends" on facebook what is being purchased by the user online, is too much information and the privacy settings need to be controlled. What I don't understand about this article is that privacy settings can be controlled on Facebook, and I don't know why he is getting so bent out of shape about this. The only peice of information that I agree with Adam in this article is his statement about Facebook on the news, "Facebook was in the news this month for its disturbing policy of making it all but impossible for users to quit the site and erase their personal information." This is the first thing i have heard about this problem on Facebook, and I wish the author would have given some more information on this topic. I expected this article to be a little bit more interesting than it was, but I guess it did make somewhat of a point.
February 18, 2008
Author: Adam Cohen
In this article, the author, Adam, is informing his readers about the lack of privacy settings on not only Facebook, but other websites, also. He mainly talks about Facebook and Google. Adam starts the article off by showing the readers exactly how much information Facebook allows its user to put out, "A co-worker apologized to me recently for being slow on a task. “It’s probably just your insomnia from last night,” I said. She was confused about how I knew, but I reminded her we were Facebook friends, and that she had posted a “status update” about her sleeplessness." The author complains that the information such as status updates and the ability to show "friends" on facebook what is being purchased by the user online, is too much information and the privacy settings need to be controlled. What I don't understand about this article is that privacy settings can be controlled on Facebook, and I don't know why he is getting so bent out of shape about this. The only peice of information that I agree with Adam in this article is his statement about Facebook on the news, "Facebook was in the news this month for its disturbing policy of making it all but impossible for users to quit the site and erase their personal information." This is the first thing i have heard about this problem on Facebook, and I wish the author would have given some more information on this topic. I expected this article to be a little bit more interesting than it was, but I guess it did make somewhat of a point.
A Rip-Off by Health Insurers?
New York Times
Feb 18th, 2008
By: N/A
This article starts and the author immeaditly states the fact and what they are trying to argue. Its very first sentence is a question which gets the readers attention and makes them think. The author presented lots of facts and good information, but didnt really have any citations or credibility to his or her name. Since they didn't even put that they wrote it. It seemed like more of an exploration argument, to maybe just present that the fact was out there. He/she does have some really interesting points about health insurance and the officials of it though. Overall, it was at least an interesting article - I just don't know how true or credible it may be.
Feb 18th, 2008
By: N/A
This article starts and the author immeaditly states the fact and what they are trying to argue. Its very first sentence is a question which gets the readers attention and makes them think. The author presented lots of facts and good information, but didnt really have any citations or credibility to his or her name. Since they didn't even put that they wrote it. It seemed like more of an exploration argument, to maybe just present that the fact was out there. He/she does have some really interesting points about health insurance and the officials of it though. Overall, it was at least an interesting article - I just don't know how true or credible it may be.
Saturday, February 16, 2008
So Is That Like an A?
The New York Times
February 16, 2008
Author: Maura J. Casey
This article is about how schools in Hartford are changing the report cards from not just a simple letter grade for each subject, but "Now, in schools in Hartford, that 10-year-old would-be athlete is being graded on how he or she “establishes and maintains a healthy lifestyle by avoiding risk-taking behavior.” In music class, students are being graded on how they make “connections between music and other disciplines through evaluation and analysis of compositions and performances.” Some report cards are as long as seven pages long and cover 58 academic, social, and behavioral skill. The author explains that the language that the report cards use to explain the students behaviors is extremely hard to understand. She says that she is a parent and she has always appretiated the basics of knowing how her child is doing in school. It is obvious that the author does not support the new way of the report cards because she that if the information is not presented simply, then it will just create more barriers. This article did not really persuade me in any way to believe one side of the argument or the other; it only explained what she likes and dislikes.
February 16, 2008
Author: Maura J. Casey
This article is about how schools in Hartford are changing the report cards from not just a simple letter grade for each subject, but "Now, in schools in Hartford, that 10-year-old would-be athlete is being graded on how he or she “establishes and maintains a healthy lifestyle by avoiding risk-taking behavior.” In music class, students are being graded on how they make “connections between music and other disciplines through evaluation and analysis of compositions and performances.” Some report cards are as long as seven pages long and cover 58 academic, social, and behavioral skill. The author explains that the language that the report cards use to explain the students behaviors is extremely hard to understand. She says that she is a parent and she has always appretiated the basics of knowing how her child is doing in school. It is obvious that the author does not support the new way of the report cards because she that if the information is not presented simply, then it will just create more barriers. This article did not really persuade me in any way to believe one side of the argument or the other; it only explained what she likes and dislikes.
Moral Barrier
No author identified.
The Washington Post
February 15, 2008; Page A20
Recently there has been much debate over the tortureous actions the United States has taken against terrorists in jail, such as waterboarding. This article examines the new legislation proposed to ban these actions by U.S. personnel. The author then proposes that our president will stand in the way of a ban on torture. The author says that if legislation ever made it to the Oval Office that "[. . .] to the great detriment of the United States and to his legacy, (President Bush) is likely to veto it." He says that we as citizens should not let this happen since the United States has stood for so many years as a nation that believes in rights and moral authority.
The author was biased in the way he presented this information; however, I found he made an effective argument. His claims were supported by reliable evidence, and he gave the reader information on what to do to try and stop this from happening. Most biased articles are not very effective to me; however, this one was because the author did not alienate his audience.
The Washington Post
February 15, 2008; Page A20
Recently there has been much debate over the tortureous actions the United States has taken against terrorists in jail, such as waterboarding. This article examines the new legislation proposed to ban these actions by U.S. personnel. The author then proposes that our president will stand in the way of a ban on torture. The author says that if legislation ever made it to the Oval Office that "[. . .] to the great detriment of the United States and to his legacy, (President Bush) is likely to veto it." He says that we as citizens should not let this happen since the United States has stood for so many years as a nation that believes in rights and moral authority.
The author was biased in the way he presented this information; however, I found he made an effective argument. His claims were supported by reliable evidence, and he gave the reader information on what to do to try and stop this from happening. Most biased articles are not very effective to me; however, this one was because the author did not alienate his audience.
Friday, February 15, 2008
Private School Vouchers
The article I read in USA Today by Robert C. Enlow was actually in response and opposed to USA today's position on government vouchers to allow deserving students to attend private schools. USA Today cited many examples where the programs haven't worked and gave two alternatives to the voucher system: expanding charter schools and encouraging interdistrict transfers for public school students who qualify. The author battled these statements by giving examples where the program has worked and set the alternatives at the same level. He stated," Our children are in trouble... vouchers win and they work." He established the voucher system as one solution out of many which shouldn't be discarded in place of a search for one end all solution. He clearly stated his evidence and purpose and breathed life into an option many have written off. Whatever options we can make available so deserving students can be offered the best education possible should be supported.
FEMA’s Formaldehyde Foul-Up
New York Times
February 15, 2008
This article talks about how the government had made another mistake with Hurricane Katrina victims. There is a threat of Formaldehyde in the trailers given to Hurricane Katrina victims. Although this has been going on for two years, FEMA is just now taking action. 519 were tested and found to have incredibly high rates of this carcinogen, which causes critical breathing problems in the people who are affected. The director of Federal Emergency Management Agency announced a five point plan to get people to better housing by this summer before the humidity sets in, making things worse. The residents who are most at risk are those who cannot help themselves, like the aged, ill, or poverty stricken.
This article was very interesting to read, as it affects people around our area. I had no idea about this toxin found in trailers. The author seems to be very passionate about this issue, strongly criticizing FEMA for not taking action. There are many references to people and tests done, establishing credibility.
February 15, 2008
This article talks about how the government had made another mistake with Hurricane Katrina victims. There is a threat of Formaldehyde in the trailers given to Hurricane Katrina victims. Although this has been going on for two years, FEMA is just now taking action. 519 were tested and found to have incredibly high rates of this carcinogen, which causes critical breathing problems in the people who are affected. The director of Federal Emergency Management Agency announced a five point plan to get people to better housing by this summer before the humidity sets in, making things worse. The residents who are most at risk are those who cannot help themselves, like the aged, ill, or poverty stricken.
This article was very interesting to read, as it affects people around our area. I had no idea about this toxin found in trailers. The author seems to be very passionate about this issue, strongly criticizing FEMA for not taking action. There are many references to people and tests done, establishing credibility.
Fema's Formaldehyde Foul-Up
New York Post
February 15, 2008
I could tell this article was full of opinion when I first read the title. The first paragraph played on all of the wrongdoing FEMA had been involved in and focused on an emotional appeal. I don't disagree with the writer at all. I do feel that FEMA neglects their responsibilities and could care less about who they are taking care of sometimes.
The article focused on the fact that FEMA's trailors were poisoned with the deadly gas formaldehyde. FEMA had known about this for sometime. One man that complained to FEMA about the large amount of formaldehyde fumes in his trailor was found dead later. FEMA refused to do anything about the toxin until the disease control center had completed a study on the trailors proving what they already knew.
I thought the article was very informative. I think it could have included some things like where the formaldehyde came from, but it did at least explain what formaldehyde was. I think that it is embarassing to the U.S. to have people like this in charge of the well being of our Katrina victims.
February 15, 2008
I could tell this article was full of opinion when I first read the title. The first paragraph played on all of the wrongdoing FEMA had been involved in and focused on an emotional appeal. I don't disagree with the writer at all. I do feel that FEMA neglects their responsibilities and could care less about who they are taking care of sometimes.
The article focused on the fact that FEMA's trailors were poisoned with the deadly gas formaldehyde. FEMA had known about this for sometime. One man that complained to FEMA about the large amount of formaldehyde fumes in his trailor was found dead later. FEMA refused to do anything about the toxin until the disease control center had completed a study on the trailors proving what they already knew.
I thought the article was very informative. I think it could have included some things like where the formaldehyde came from, but it did at least explain what formaldehyde was. I think that it is embarassing to the U.S. to have people like this in charge of the well being of our Katrina victims.
Thursday, February 14, 2008
The War on Drugs Starts Here
The War on Drugs Starts Here
The New York Times
February 13, 2008
The author explains the drug problem using supply and demand. If our people in the United States are not demanding drugs, then there will not be a huge market for drugs. The author suggests that if the United States works harder on drug prevention and treating addicts, then there will be less drug trafficking from Mexico and Central America. In the article, the Bush administration is criticized for giving a $1.4 billion assistance package for Mexico and Central America to combat the drug trade. The Bush administration is also criticized for the 1.5 percent cut in spending on domestic drug prevention and treatment programs. The percentage of students trying or abusing cocaine and methamphetamine has decreased. However, there are more teenagers and adults abusing other narcotics, like prescription drugs. Many Americans over 18 are trying everything from heroin to marijuana to methamphetamine, so something needs to be done and soon.
It is obvious that there is a drug problem in America. I am sure that almost everyone knows at least one person that has or still does some type of drug. I think the author did a good job presenting the problem in a logical way. What I liked most was that the author presented a solution. It was not a foolproof solution, but it is a start to an increasing problem. The author did not try to get me to do something about this problem, but was basically letting me know there was one.
The New York Times
February 13, 2008
The author explains the drug problem using supply and demand. If our people in the United States are not demanding drugs, then there will not be a huge market for drugs. The author suggests that if the United States works harder on drug prevention and treating addicts, then there will be less drug trafficking from Mexico and Central America. In the article, the Bush administration is criticized for giving a $1.4 billion assistance package for Mexico and Central America to combat the drug trade. The Bush administration is also criticized for the 1.5 percent cut in spending on domestic drug prevention and treatment programs. The percentage of students trying or abusing cocaine and methamphetamine has decreased. However, there are more teenagers and adults abusing other narcotics, like prescription drugs. Many Americans over 18 are trying everything from heroin to marijuana to methamphetamine, so something needs to be done and soon.
It is obvious that there is a drug problem in America. I am sure that almost everyone knows at least one person that has or still does some type of drug. I think the author did a good job presenting the problem in a logical way. What I liked most was that the author presented a solution. It was not a foolproof solution, but it is a start to an increasing problem. The author did not try to get me to do something about this problem, but was basically letting me know there was one.
On Treating Nature-Deficit Disorder
The Advocate, 6B
February 12, 2008
Froma Harrop
This article explains the need for children and adults to experience nature. Froma Harrop accuses herself and others of videophilia, or the love of electronic media. She goes on to explain that today’s society stays inside and watches television or plays video games instead of being outdoors. Richard Louv, an author she quotes in this article, explains this as a sickness called nature deficit disorder. He thinks that children know more about nature but haven’t experienced. He says going outdoors can ease attention-deficit disorder (ADD), aids cognitive development, enhances creativity and reduces stress. Louv isn’t blaming video games for this “deficit”, but says parents do not let their children explore around their homes for fear the children will be kidnapped or victimized by adults. As a solution to this fear, Louv goes on to suggest the parents should take their children to the park or get them involved in Scouts or nature centers. If children do not have a love for nature, then they will not see a need to conserve it when they grow up.
I do not know if videophilia or nature deficit disorder are actual terms or if the author made them up. I supposed it does not matter because the author’s point was to simply say that we should go outside more. She makes an excellent point. Today, people are so worried about getting ahead in the world that they do not go outside to enjoy nature and all that it offers. When I was a child, I was always outdoors and I loved it. I think an hour of doing something outside should be part of children’s homework, if that is possible. Many of times I was stuck inside doing homework and wasted a beautiful day.
February 12, 2008
Froma Harrop
This article explains the need for children and adults to experience nature. Froma Harrop accuses herself and others of videophilia, or the love of electronic media. She goes on to explain that today’s society stays inside and watches television or plays video games instead of being outdoors. Richard Louv, an author she quotes in this article, explains this as a sickness called nature deficit disorder. He thinks that children know more about nature but haven’t experienced. He says going outdoors can ease attention-deficit disorder (ADD), aids cognitive development, enhances creativity and reduces stress. Louv isn’t blaming video games for this “deficit”, but says parents do not let their children explore around their homes for fear the children will be kidnapped or victimized by adults. As a solution to this fear, Louv goes on to suggest the parents should take their children to the park or get them involved in Scouts or nature centers. If children do not have a love for nature, then they will not see a need to conserve it when they grow up.
I do not know if videophilia or nature deficit disorder are actual terms or if the author made them up. I supposed it does not matter because the author’s point was to simply say that we should go outside more. She makes an excellent point. Today, people are so worried about getting ahead in the world that they do not go outside to enjoy nature and all that it offers. When I was a child, I was always outdoors and I loved it. I think an hour of doing something outside should be part of children’s homework, if that is possible. Many of times I was stuck inside doing homework and wasted a beautiful day.
So is that like an A?
New York Times
February 14, 2008
Maura J. Casey
February 14, 2008
Maura J. Casey
This article is about how different report cards are in modern days compared to when most people were in grade school. Apparently the days of just putting an A or a gold star are gone. Schools in Hartford are now grading 10 year olds in gym class not on how well they participate in kickball, but on how he or she “establishes and maintains a healthy lifestyle by avoiding risk-taking behavior.” And music class students are now being graded on “connections between music and other disciplines through evaluation and analysis of compositions and performances.” These are actual examples from a new report card from Hartford’s elementary schools which measures 58 academic, social, and behavioral skills, and the author believes that we may be taking this a bit too far. Report cards nowadays use a vast vocabulary to describe a student’s progress, and sometimes the report cards can even be seven pages long. However, parents seem to have received the evaluations very positively. I very much enjoyed the author’s humorous point of view, especially when she said, “If I got a report card that told me my 10-year-old ‘uses numeracy and literacy skills to describe, analyze and present scientific content, data and ideas,’ I would have reached for a dictionary and an aspirin. It is enough to make me think longingly of the days of happy face stickers and gold stars.” I believe she has an excellent point, however, academic levels have been advancing very quickly around the country and I suppose that with it comes more challenging curriculum and goals for the students. Still, there is a point where a seven-page report card on your child’s progress becomes just silly.
Wednesday, February 13, 2008
Manifest Mining
A recent editorial from the New York Times shed light on an out of date law from the trailblazing days. The General Mining Law of 1872 sets the the standards for mining on public lands and has yet to be amended for today's national park and environmental considerations. This law bounced back into the spotlight when the Federal Forest Service awarded a British company the right to search for uranium just outside Grand Canyon National Park with little public notice and no formal environmental review. I thought the article was crisp and to the point. The author clearly defined the forthcomings of the law while managing to stay neutral on the issue. I also applaud his effort to goad congress into action by pointing out their responsibility to amend the law.
Bringing up the rear
The Times Picayune
Febuary 13, 2007
This article was about the recent rating that FEMA received in a survey that poled people’s views of US government agencies. FEMA ranked last out of 22. It came in behind even tax collecting organizations. The author discuses how when surveyed the number of people who had a favorable view of FEMA has gone up in the last year; however, the percent of people who gave FEMA a favorable rating is nowhere near where it was before Katrina. I thought the author did a good job of explaining the issue without really taking sides. While he talked about how people are still angry at all happened during Katrina, he also offered the view of some of FEMA’s officials. They discussed how FEMA has changed as an organization and peopel should give them another chance. It was obvious that this author had done his research .
http://www.nola.com/news/t-p/editorials/index.ssf?/base/news-4/120288374758230.xml&coll=1
Febuary 13, 2007
This article was about the recent rating that FEMA received in a survey that poled people’s views of US government agencies. FEMA ranked last out of 22. It came in behind even tax collecting organizations. The author discuses how when surveyed the number of people who had a favorable view of FEMA has gone up in the last year; however, the percent of people who gave FEMA a favorable rating is nowhere near where it was before Katrina. I thought the author did a good job of explaining the issue without really taking sides. While he talked about how people are still angry at all happened during Katrina, he also offered the view of some of FEMA’s officials. They discussed how FEMA has changed as an organization and peopel should give them another chance. It was obvious that this author had done his research .
http://www.nola.com/news/t-p/editorials/index.ssf?/base/news-4/120288374758230.xml&coll=1
Salvation Army thanks Contributers
Salvation Army thanks Contributers
James C. Carver
The Advocate, page 6B
2/8/08
The Salvation Army in the Baton Rouge area has written an article to express their gratitude due to the extreme generosity of the Baton Rouge community. While other Salvation Army branches are dwindleing, the Baton Rouge sect is able to run itelf easily and sufficiently because of the increase in charitable collections and donations. In the Baton Rouge are there was a 13 percent increase in donations this year. Shortly after the article begins to talk about all the things that Salvation Army does for the city and its surrounding areas. With donations and help for the homeless and the poor, as well as sponsered programs for substance abuse users, the Baton Rouge Salvation Army is continuosly helping the community. Other programs for children after school assist aproximately 1300 families in the nearby area. In conclusion the author thanks his supporters again and then ask them to please continue to support them for the good of the community.
I really liked this article because I feel it is important to contribute and to donate to your surrounding charitys. I also think that it is important for everyone even those in need to be thankful and express your gratitude. I think the article was very well writted and can easily gain even more support from the community.
James C. Carver
The Advocate, page 6B
2/8/08
The Salvation Army in the Baton Rouge area has written an article to express their gratitude due to the extreme generosity of the Baton Rouge community. While other Salvation Army branches are dwindleing, the Baton Rouge sect is able to run itelf easily and sufficiently because of the increase in charitable collections and donations. In the Baton Rouge are there was a 13 percent increase in donations this year. Shortly after the article begins to talk about all the things that Salvation Army does for the city and its surrounding areas. With donations and help for the homeless and the poor, as well as sponsered programs for substance abuse users, the Baton Rouge Salvation Army is continuosly helping the community. Other programs for children after school assist aproximately 1300 families in the nearby area. In conclusion the author thanks his supporters again and then ask them to please continue to support them for the good of the community.
I really liked this article because I feel it is important to contribute and to donate to your surrounding charitys. I also think that it is important for everyone even those in need to be thankful and express your gratitude. I think the article was very well writted and can easily gain even more support from the community.
Loop would destroy Alligator Bayou
Loop would destroy Alligator Bayou
Dale Clary
The Advocate, page4B
2/11/08
The article I read has been written in attempts to catch the attention of the Baton Rouge community in order preserve Alligator Bayou and the Bluff Swamp Wildlife reserve. The author has made it clear that the proposed Baton Rouge loop will compleely destroy everything at Alligator Bayou. Swamp tours, gator pits, and the Pavilion will all be destroyed and lost. The authors reasoning for wanting to preserve these natural landmarks is to keep Louisiana's unique appeal. Alligator Bayou is the crown jewel of eco-tourism, and people come from all over the world to see Louisiana's unique natural beauty. Paving over Baton Rouge's own paradise is not unique nor is it smart when taking into consideration the growth of the city.
I thouroughly enjoyed reqading this article and felt that it was both informative and convincing. However i do feel that if the author had added some statistics involving the revenue that Alligator Bayou brings into the city, more people would gravitate towards his point of view and the proposed loop would be no more.
Dale Clary
The Advocate, page4B
2/11/08
The article I read has been written in attempts to catch the attention of the Baton Rouge community in order preserve Alligator Bayou and the Bluff Swamp Wildlife reserve. The author has made it clear that the proposed Baton Rouge loop will compleely destroy everything at Alligator Bayou. Swamp tours, gator pits, and the Pavilion will all be destroyed and lost. The authors reasoning for wanting to preserve these natural landmarks is to keep Louisiana's unique appeal. Alligator Bayou is the crown jewel of eco-tourism, and people come from all over the world to see Louisiana's unique natural beauty. Paving over Baton Rouge's own paradise is not unique nor is it smart when taking into consideration the growth of the city.
I thouroughly enjoyed reqading this article and felt that it was both informative and convincing. However i do feel that if the author had added some statistics involving the revenue that Alligator Bayou brings into the city, more people would gravitate towards his point of view and the proposed loop would be no more.
Tuesday, February 12, 2008
Should homeowner thank FEMA?
by Pamela Ortis
The Advocate
Febuary 12, 2008
The writer of this article, Pamela Ortis, is discussing the fact that she will now have to pay for her flood insurance a different way instead of it coming out in escrow. She goes on to say that this is all FEMA's fault. I thought this article was very poorly written. It was obvious that the writer had not done much research into the subject besides talking with her bank. It seemed to me the whole article was written out of anger, making it hard to believe everything she says. I think if the author had presented more information the article would have been a lot mroe effective. She showed a very biased few against some of the things FEMA had done.
The Advocate
Febuary 12, 2008
The writer of this article, Pamela Ortis, is discussing the fact that she will now have to pay for her flood insurance a different way instead of it coming out in escrow. She goes on to say that this is all FEMA's fault. I thought this article was very poorly written. It was obvious that the writer had not done much research into the subject besides talking with her bank. It seemed to me the whole article was written out of anger, making it hard to believe everything she says. I think if the author had presented more information the article would have been a lot mroe effective. She showed a very biased few against some of the things FEMA had done.
Recession Imminent?
I recently read an article in The New York Times titled "A Long Story" by Paul Krugman. He basically is raising a warning flag that a recession is imminent and may last longer than any in the past 3 decades. He cites the housing market fallout and failing credit as indicators of its proximity and compares these trends to recessions in the past. He then critiques the current administration's "stimulus package" concluding its effects will be insufficient and short-lived. Before closing, he offers two conditions for the next administration to weaken or possibly thwart impending financial doom: First, understand there are other positive economic actions besides cutting taxes and second, be interested in economic policy. I thought the article more resembled a quick office chat than a New York Times editorial. The author thrusts a heated topic which has been widely discussed but only manages one citation and limited facts. The article seemed rife with conjecture and even the conditions he offered were plainly good common sense. He did not; however, miss a chance to criticize the Bush Administration which earns my seal of approval.
Monday, February 11, 2008
USPS THE NEW UPS?
CNN.com
02/11/08
Every time I have send something in the mail I notice that the price of the stamp has increased. I don't ship many things thanks to online bill pay. I had a book of stamps from a year ago. In order to use them I have o buy the little add on stamps. It is beginning to be a pain. The USPS announced that they will raise the price yet again one whole penny. A process that used to take a year can now take only 45 days due to new laws made in 2006. As long as the price is a reflection of inflation it is ok to raise. The price for ads in the mail also went up. Hopefully this will stop some ads from stuffing my mailbox daily. Before you know it the USPS will grasp email and start charging for that as well.
Be Careful With Prescription Drugs
The Advocate
Jan 31, 2008
Randolph M. Howes, M.D., Ph.D.
The author talks about how drug companies, while they are there to make your life better, their main goal is to run a business and make money. He uses the Lipitor heart medication as an example. They used the inventor of the artifical heart Robert Jarvik to hype up and sell the product. What they didn't do however was tell about the negative side effects. The author is a doctor, so he is a reliable source. He states, "Sadly, today’s doctors are so busy that many do not have an in-depth knowledge of the very drugs which they prescribe, and full disclosure of harmful side effects has not been provided to them." The author also went on to give his thoughts on what you should do when considering medications. I think it was a very well written article and written by a very reliable source. It was very informative and makes me more cautious when taking medications.
Jan 31, 2008
Randolph M. Howes, M.D., Ph.D.
The author talks about how drug companies, while they are there to make your life better, their main goal is to run a business and make money. He uses the Lipitor heart medication as an example. They used the inventor of the artifical heart Robert Jarvik to hype up and sell the product. What they didn't do however was tell about the negative side effects. The author is a doctor, so he is a reliable source. He states, "Sadly, today’s doctors are so busy that many do not have an in-depth knowledge of the very drugs which they prescribe, and full disclosure of harmful side effects has not been provided to them." The author also went on to give his thoughts on what you should do when considering medications. I think it was a very well written article and written by a very reliable source. It was very informative and makes me more cautious when taking medications.
"A School That's Too High On Gizmos"
Washington Post
February 10, 2008
Author: Patrick Welsh
T.C. William's High School in Alexandria, Virginia, is one of the most expensive high schools in the nation. Last year, the school moved into a new building that cost 98 million dollars. When I first heard the cost it blew my mind. This school is filled with all the technological advances that are on the market today. They have LCD projectors, a high tech cafeteria, lap tops for every student, and a "school pad." While I would expect the teachers to be estatic over all of these advances, the opposite is the truth. They feel that much of the learning process is being taken away by the technology. The teachers feel that this is creating a lazy breed of people because students are looking for the easy answer to everything, and not taking the time to sit down and absorb learning. Mr. Welsh went on to state that even the administration is turning to things like email, rather than face to face conversation. While the technology looks good in the headlines, most of the staff feels that the students could be given more of a quality education without it. While I think it is important to be proficient with the technologies of today, I find nothing wrong with paper and a pen. Everything in moderation is usually key.
February 10, 2008
Author: Patrick Welsh
T.C. William's High School in Alexandria, Virginia, is one of the most expensive high schools in the nation. Last year, the school moved into a new building that cost 98 million dollars. When I first heard the cost it blew my mind. This school is filled with all the technological advances that are on the market today. They have LCD projectors, a high tech cafeteria, lap tops for every student, and a "school pad." While I would expect the teachers to be estatic over all of these advances, the opposite is the truth. They feel that much of the learning process is being taken away by the technology. The teachers feel that this is creating a lazy breed of people because students are looking for the easy answer to everything, and not taking the time to sit down and absorb learning. Mr. Welsh went on to state that even the administration is turning to things like email, rather than face to face conversation. While the technology looks good in the headlines, most of the staff feels that the students could be given more of a quality education without it. While I think it is important to be proficient with the technologies of today, I find nothing wrong with paper and a pen. Everything in moderation is usually key.
An Intolerable Fraud
There are many charities out there that seem like they are reputable and reliable sources, but some of them are really ripping you off. “Non-profit” organizations such as Help Hospitalized Veterans and The Coalition to Salute America’s Heroes are two of the military charities that are turning more of the profit over to the CEO than any troop overseas or disabled veteran. Most non-profit companies give 30 percent to their owner and workers, but these companies are taking up to 70 and 80 percent. They are raising tons of money because they will put a picture of a disabled war veteran to win our sympathy, but the beneficiary troops say they’ve only gotten sports phone cards so they can check the American sports scores. All of this sneaky stealing and cheating people out of their money is completely legal. It is not illegal to have people give money to you, but the lavish spending instead of giving it to the intended people is not only looked down upon, it’s just wrong. I had no idea that this was happening. The columnist brought a really good issue to my attention. I thought all the money my family and I gave away was really going to the charity we intended, but it could have been going to buying someone a brand new car. As the author said, Congress really needs to buckle down on the unnoticed fraud happening within these charities.
Sunday, February 10, 2008
Too High A Price for Building
New York Times
Author Unknown
February 8, 2008
Last month a construction worker fell 42 stories in New York City. Reforms are being put into action to protect workers, as well as pedestrians. Workers are now required to have a license to work, where as before anyone could just show up for the job. The city’s Building Department also wants to start requiring safety managers on site. Such permits add onto expensive costs on construction sites but in the end is well worth the safety of everyone. I thought the author wrote this article very well, getting right to the point and being very clear about what needs to be done in order to enact safety measures. There are a few references to councils and departments, making the author seem credible. I had no idea about how easy just anyone could walk onto a job and put someone’s life at risk. I think this article brought up a very good point that safety needs to be addressed.
Author Unknown
February 8, 2008
Last month a construction worker fell 42 stories in New York City. Reforms are being put into action to protect workers, as well as pedestrians. Workers are now required to have a license to work, where as before anyone could just show up for the job. The city’s Building Department also wants to start requiring safety managers on site. Such permits add onto expensive costs on construction sites but in the end is well worth the safety of everyone. I thought the author wrote this article very well, getting right to the point and being very clear about what needs to be done in order to enact safety measures. There are a few references to councils and departments, making the author seem credible. I had no idea about how easy just anyone could walk onto a job and put someone’s life at risk. I think this article brought up a very good point that safety needs to be addressed.
Biofuels Deemed a Greenhouse Threat
New York Times
February 8, 2008
Elisabeth Rosenthal
This article talks about how biofuels, which are supposed to be beneficial to the environment are actually just as damaging as fuels. There is reference to studies done to see the effects of biofuels on natural land that is being turned into crop land in order to make biofuels. When these lands are cleared, there is mass amount of carbon emission released into the atmosphere and no plants to absorb the emissions. An environment professor at Princeton University brings up the point of a problem with previous analysis of land development. By clearing grasslands to make biofuels, there are major amount of greenhouse emissions making climate change worse. Not only are fields cleared for biofuels, but twice as many crops in order to feed the population at home. In Brazil, they are clearing the Amazon in order to plant crops.
I thought this article was researched very well, citing many researchers, studies, panels, and doctors. It brought about the other side of global warming, which I did not really think about: our solution might not be the right solution. The article flowed pretty well and was easy to follow. I thought the author established credibility very well.
February 8, 2008
Elisabeth Rosenthal
This article talks about how biofuels, which are supposed to be beneficial to the environment are actually just as damaging as fuels. There is reference to studies done to see the effects of biofuels on natural land that is being turned into crop land in order to make biofuels. When these lands are cleared, there is mass amount of carbon emission released into the atmosphere and no plants to absorb the emissions. An environment professor at Princeton University brings up the point of a problem with previous analysis of land development. By clearing grasslands to make biofuels, there are major amount of greenhouse emissions making climate change worse. Not only are fields cleared for biofuels, but twice as many crops in order to feed the population at home. In Brazil, they are clearing the Amazon in order to plant crops.
I thought this article was researched very well, citing many researchers, studies, panels, and doctors. It brought about the other side of global warming, which I did not really think about: our solution might not be the right solution. The article flowed pretty well and was easy to follow. I thought the author established credibility very well.
Friday, February 8, 2008
FDA Needs More Money and Talent
The Food and Drug Administration does not having enough money or trained scientists to properly run their company. Last week, they had to tell a Congressional panel that they were “barely hanging on by their fingertips”. Technology in today’s world is growing at a rapid pace. With all these changes, the scientists aren’t staying current with product safety methods, and this could be dangerous to us as consumers. They are also lacking enough inspection workers and up-to-date computer systems to inspect foreign plants that are importing food, drugs, and other products. Congress has tried to increase their workload and add employees, but they have failed to give them the money or resources needed to do the job right. Mr. Hutt, the agency’s former chief counsel, wants to see the agency’s money double and have 50 percent more staff within the next two years.
I thought this article was well written and did a good job of bringing an issue to the table. I never even knew this was going on. Whenever I heard “F.D.A. Approved”, I thought it meant that product was ok for me to buy. I liked how the article was informative and well-researched. The columnist wasn’t really trying to persuade the audience, just inform them about an issue he feels strongly about.
I thought this article was well written and did a good job of bringing an issue to the table. I never even knew this was going on. Whenever I heard “F.D.A. Approved”, I thought it meant that product was ok for me to buy. I liked how the article was informative and well-researched. The columnist wasn’t really trying to persuade the audience, just inform them about an issue he feels strongly about.
Thursday, February 7, 2008
Who's the 800 pound Gorilla?
New York Times
January 7,2008
Author Unknown
Elyse Bower
This article is giving the facts about Google,Microsoft, and Yahoo. More than half of Americans used Googles search engine rather then Microsoft and Yahoo. Microsoft has placed a bid to merge with Yahoo. Microsoft and Yahoo have more clients for e-mail and instant messaging than Google. Google does not want the two to merge because it would stifle competition. The author thinks that the internet would be better served if Yahoo and Google would join up. The author states that Microsoft has a history of bullying and that it just looks out for itself. I think the author is very biased when it comes to Microsoft. The author clearly thinks that Microsoft is trying to undercut all competitors and only states negative things about Microsoft. Nothing negative is said about Google or Yahoo. It is a good article because it does state a lot of facts about the situation.The author does a good job of convincing you not to like Microsoft and for you to feel for the underdog.
January 7,2008
Author Unknown
Elyse Bower
This article is giving the facts about Google,Microsoft, and Yahoo. More than half of Americans used Googles search engine rather then Microsoft and Yahoo. Microsoft has placed a bid to merge with Yahoo. Microsoft and Yahoo have more clients for e-mail and instant messaging than Google. Google does not want the two to merge because it would stifle competition. The author thinks that the internet would be better served if Yahoo and Google would join up. The author states that Microsoft has a history of bullying and that it just looks out for itself. I think the author is very biased when it comes to Microsoft. The author clearly thinks that Microsoft is trying to undercut all competitors and only states negative things about Microsoft. Nothing negative is said about Google or Yahoo. It is a good article because it does state a lot of facts about the situation.The author does a good job of convincing you not to like Microsoft and for you to feel for the underdog.
A Shameful Record
The New York Times
February 6, 2008
Author Unknown
The author of this editorial in the New York Times believes that the
I believe that this article was backed up with a lot of facts, and it seems that the author is very confident that behavior resulting in crime can change from when juveniles are young, impressionable, and not knowledgeable about their actions. I believe that it is a good idea for there to be an opportunity to show changes to a parole board after 25 years in prison for a crime committed as a minor. It was interesting to hear all of the facts about just how many minors are serving life sentences without parole. They really don't even have a chance from the get go.
A Fine Mess
By MARC AMBINDER
New York Times
Published: February 7, 2008
This article explains how the democrats presenting their candidates at a certain time of the year depending on what region might help or hemorrhage their presidential run. The author uses a lot of great facts and refers to many different dates. He mentions the good and the bad of certain times depending on what region of the United States they are in. However, if you don't follow the election and politics very closely[like myself] the article can get pretty confusing very quickly. He kind of just presents you with all of these dates and assumes that you know what happened on them. He doesn't really mention why these are good dates or explain them very well, nor does he mention exactly what happened on these dates. I think the article was well written, as the author had many interesting facts and proves his point very well with the given facts. But, I had to read over it a few seperate times to completely understand the article.
New York Times
Published: February 7, 2008
This article explains how the democrats presenting their candidates at a certain time of the year depending on what region might help or hemorrhage their presidential run. The author uses a lot of great facts and refers to many different dates. He mentions the good and the bad of certain times depending on what region of the United States they are in. However, if you don't follow the election and politics very closely[like myself] the article can get pretty confusing very quickly. He kind of just presents you with all of these dates and assumes that you know what happened on them. He doesn't really mention why these are good dates or explain them very well, nor does he mention exactly what happened on these dates. I think the article was well written, as the author had many interesting facts and proves his point very well with the given facts. But, I had to read over it a few seperate times to completely understand the article.
Wednesday, February 6, 2008
All You Need Is Hate
The New York Times
February 6, 2008
Stanley Fish
This article takes a good hard look at the media and Hillary. The writer very clearly maps out the fact that those who love and hate Hillary Clinton are all involved in the constant scrutiny of her every move. He talks about an e-mailer he has who constantly sends him things about Hillary the muderer, adulteress, and sociopath. The article goes on to talk about how everyone who talks about Hillary Clinton has something new to evaluate about her. Some people criticize her laugh. Some talk about the crazy look in her eyes. Some even contimplate whether Hillary is really crying or is faking it. The writer does a great job at presenting all of this information because he does not say either way whether he is for or agaisnt Hillary Clinton. I think the writer honestly wants a good clean race for the presidential candidacy. Although I do not agree with all of Hillary Clinton's ideas, the article made me realize that everybody contributes to this "Hillary Hate". I myself am guilty of judging her clothes, look, and cry tactics. I guess with all of the publicity, everyone has forgotten what this race is really about. I don't think hatred stops there though. The writer even compares Hillary to somewhat of an unloading dock like Bush. Bush undergoes the same kind of scruntiny and hatred. What many people fail to realize is what these people go through everyday, the decisions they have to make, and the fact that they have an entire country of people judging their every move. After reading the article I decided that the writer was right in my opinion. Everyone needs to look at policies and personal beliefs to decide on who they will vote for. People need to quit judging candidates on their clothes or laughs. The writer did very well and was careful not to be bias in any direction. I listened to what he had to say because I felt like he wasn't pushing his opinion on me.
February 6, 2008
Stanley Fish
This article takes a good hard look at the media and Hillary. The writer very clearly maps out the fact that those who love and hate Hillary Clinton are all involved in the constant scrutiny of her every move. He talks about an e-mailer he has who constantly sends him things about Hillary the muderer, adulteress, and sociopath. The article goes on to talk about how everyone who talks about Hillary Clinton has something new to evaluate about her. Some people criticize her laugh. Some talk about the crazy look in her eyes. Some even contimplate whether Hillary is really crying or is faking it. The writer does a great job at presenting all of this information because he does not say either way whether he is for or agaisnt Hillary Clinton. I think the writer honestly wants a good clean race for the presidential candidacy. Although I do not agree with all of Hillary Clinton's ideas, the article made me realize that everybody contributes to this "Hillary Hate". I myself am guilty of judging her clothes, look, and cry tactics. I guess with all of the publicity, everyone has forgotten what this race is really about. I don't think hatred stops there though. The writer even compares Hillary to somewhat of an unloading dock like Bush. Bush undergoes the same kind of scruntiny and hatred. What many people fail to realize is what these people go through everyday, the decisions they have to make, and the fact that they have an entire country of people judging their every move. After reading the article I decided that the writer was right in my opinion. Everyone needs to look at policies and personal beliefs to decide on who they will vote for. People need to quit judging candidates on their clothes or laughs. The writer did very well and was careful not to be bias in any direction. I listened to what he had to say because I felt like he wasn't pushing his opinion on me.
A Good Plan for Traffic Relief
The New York Times
February 6, 2008
Author Unknown
This article is explaining Mayor Michael Bloomberg's solution for New York's traffic gridlock. The writer explains, "A commission, appointed by top state and city officials, has now proposed a sensible pricing plan." Not only is this a solution for the traffic in New York, but it's going to take a toll on the people that have to pay to drive. He is proposing one to twenty-one dollars from taxi's to eighteen wheelers to drive south of Manhattan's 60th street. The writer states, "The commission projects that the worst traffic would be relieved by one-third — with positive ripples to the city’s farthest edges and beyond — and projected revenues would approach $500 million annually." But just because this writer knows every detail about the proposal, does not mean he is all for it. He says later that as good as this plan is, it would benefit from some tweaking. The writer gives his ideas to make this plan more effective by stating several thought out ideas to make it more effective. I really like how the writer explains the commission and then gives his opinion on not only if he likes it or not, but his thoughts to make it better.
February 6, 2008
Author Unknown
This article is explaining Mayor Michael Bloomberg's solution for New York's traffic gridlock. The writer explains, "A commission, appointed by top state and city officials, has now proposed a sensible pricing plan." Not only is this a solution for the traffic in New York, but it's going to take a toll on the people that have to pay to drive. He is proposing one to twenty-one dollars from taxi's to eighteen wheelers to drive south of Manhattan's 60th street. The writer states, "The commission projects that the worst traffic would be relieved by one-third — with positive ripples to the city’s farthest edges and beyond — and projected revenues would approach $500 million annually." But just because this writer knows every detail about the proposal, does not mean he is all for it. He says later that as good as this plan is, it would benefit from some tweaking. The writer gives his ideas to make this plan more effective by stating several thought out ideas to make it more effective. I really like how the writer explains the commission and then gives his opinion on not only if he likes it or not, but his thoughts to make it better.
You're 16, You're Beautiful and You're a Voter.
February 6, 2008
New York Times
Author: Anya Kamenetz
At first glance, I thought this article was a satire. However, I read it once more and I discovered that the author was serious. The author felt that the age for voting should be lowered to sixteen, as well as the drinking age, and the age for marriage. While she did condone this, she also called for educational courses to educate teenagers in making the right decisions. For example, in order to legally drink at the age of sixteen, one must take an educational course on alcoholism. She provided a study that showed that students who had drank while in the company of their parents were less likely to overindulge when they were on their own or with friends. The author stated by letting a wider age range into the voting arena, the country would receive a more unbiased view on what the issues were in the country. The examples she gave were moral questions like execution, and the issue of serving in Iraq. Here is a quote that I think best sums up the article. "The more we treat teenagers as adults, the more they rise to our expectations. From a developmental and vocational point of view, the late teens are the right starting point for young people to think seriously about their futures. Government can help this process by bestowing rights along with responsibilities." While this author made some very good points, she was heavily biased and did not present the other side to this argument. Reading it was worthwhile, but I would have liked to seen the other point of view.
New York Times
Author: Anya Kamenetz
At first glance, I thought this article was a satire. However, I read it once more and I discovered that the author was serious. The author felt that the age for voting should be lowered to sixteen, as well as the drinking age, and the age for marriage. While she did condone this, she also called for educational courses to educate teenagers in making the right decisions. For example, in order to legally drink at the age of sixteen, one must take an educational course on alcoholism. She provided a study that showed that students who had drank while in the company of their parents were less likely to overindulge when they were on their own or with friends. The author stated by letting a wider age range into the voting arena, the country would receive a more unbiased view on what the issues were in the country. The examples she gave were moral questions like execution, and the issue of serving in Iraq. Here is a quote that I think best sums up the article. "The more we treat teenagers as adults, the more they rise to our expectations. From a developmental and vocational point of view, the late teens are the right starting point for young people to think seriously about their futures. Government can help this process by bestowing rights along with responsibilities." While this author made some very good points, she was heavily biased and did not present the other side to this argument. Reading it was worthwhile, but I would have liked to seen the other point of view.
Tuesday, February 5, 2008
Performance Pay
No author identified.
The Washington Post
February 5, 2008; Page A18
This article examines the recent efforts in Maryland to get students to do better in school. The author states that the graduation rate in Maryland is only 34%, which is the third worst in the nation. Baltimore has recently gotten permission from the state to pay students, who go to extra tutoring sessions and show progress, a $110 per student per subject. The author of the article then discusses both sides of the issue. One being that it is merely a bribe and will show no drastic change in the end, and the other side saying that it will result in progress and increase study time for students who would normally have to be working. It was a very unbiased and well researched article. The author clearly was making an informative argument showing neither disliking nor liking of the proposal. I do not know if this would necessarily be the best way to increase Maryland's graduation rate; however, I would like to see the outcomes of these new efforts.
The Washington Post
February 5, 2008; Page A18
This article examines the recent efforts in Maryland to get students to do better in school. The author states that the graduation rate in Maryland is only 34%, which is the third worst in the nation. Baltimore has recently gotten permission from the state to pay students, who go to extra tutoring sessions and show progress, a $110 per student per subject. The author of the article then discusses both sides of the issue. One being that it is merely a bribe and will show no drastic change in the end, and the other side saying that it will result in progress and increase study time for students who would normally have to be working. It was a very unbiased and well researched article. The author clearly was making an informative argument showing neither disliking nor liking of the proposal. I do not know if this would necessarily be the best way to increase Maryland's graduation rate; however, I would like to see the outcomes of these new efforts.
Sunday, February 3, 2008
Are You Up Yet?
The New York Times
February 1, 2008
In the article, the author writes about the problem of teenagers not being able to stay awake in class. The author explains that children usually fall asleep in class because they produce melatonin, a sleep-inducing hormone, around 11 p.m. and that production peaks until about 7 a.m. The melatonin in adults peaks until around 4 a.m. This is why it is so hard to wake teenagers before 7 o’clock. The author continues to suggest a “simple” solution that some schools have already implemented which is for schools to start later. Starting school later seems like a simple and smart solution to keep teenagers awake and alert to learn. However, many school districts have abandoned this idea because parents, coaches, and school bus companies have complained. The author did a good job explaining this issue. The article included facts from researchers, and it suggested a solution. It also ended with a statement suggesting that this problem needed to be researched more in depth because it is important for children to be awake to learn. I wish my school would have started later.
Friday, February 1, 2008
Only Connect
New York Times
January 31, 2008
By: Chris Suellentrop
This article was talking about how McCain beat Giuliani. He describes that Giuliani pretty much got dominated in the race because he lacks "skills in retail politics". He states that McCain, however, is not lacking such skills in the least. The author uses great quotes and adjectives to describe McCain's drive to win. The author provides useful facts and the writing seems researched. He seems one sided, but he is only stating the obvious based on the facts. I think he tries to expose Giuliani as more of a celebrity than a presidential candidate.
January 31, 2008
By: Chris Suellentrop
This article was talking about how McCain beat Giuliani. He describes that Giuliani pretty much got dominated in the race because he lacks "skills in retail politics". He states that McCain, however, is not lacking such skills in the least. The author uses great quotes and adjectives to describe McCain's drive to win. The author provides useful facts and the writing seems researched. He seems one sided, but he is only stating the obvious based on the facts. I think he tries to expose Giuliani as more of a celebrity than a presidential candidate.
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